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simple web design diastone.sk
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Hi there! Looks good but: the upper left 3D cool design stuff is in too great contrast with the rest of the site. In my humble opinion, it is not corresponding with the idea of the site, to sell tombstones. I think if people want to buy a tombstone, they should get an idea of the website that the people selling these stones are solid, responsible and take death seriously. Some feeling like all the financial institutions want to express. But this is not so important, everybody has a different view at death and a tombstone website.
The more important feedback is: the font of the texts is not very good. Its simple but it could be better and/or more suited to the feeling/idea behind this site. Maybe the whole design shoul look like engraved in stone. And maybe not, I guess a million designers designing tombstone websites had this idea too. Its cool to do it in this way but I think its not finished, its unhatched.
Some other ideas: maybe you did not design the logo and had to use the logo of the company. In this case, do not take this seriously. The logo DIASTONE is not good. The "stonehenge lookalike" logo is too unprofessional, it uses shading which will propably not reproduce well when printed. For me it also resembles chinese/japan letters. The DIA in Diastone (propably not your fault) resembles some stuff for sick diabetes people. The red in it does not cooperate with the rest of the site- I suggest to use a some red in other parts of the design or to use some other color version of the logo. Also the red is aggressive, dynamic. the best (and million times used) version of a red and black logo is on a white underlayer. The diastone font is strong and bold, what could be good to resemble strong thick stones, but the font is, I think, not well chosen. I would suppose some elegant version of the Times new roman family, something a little bit resembling the fonts used on real tombstones, something with serifs.
I like the design of this site, but it would be good for something not so conservative, serious and un-fresh.
Best wishes and thanx for visiting my site :)